i thought it was great!
it was perfect. I was a little bit scared the old guy was going to loop 3 times, but then he died. I was thinking it would be a little funny if you just had the first one loop over and over again without ever stopping, kind of like the pokemon parody 'splash attack' or whatever it's called.
i felt pointless was good for this though, it's not like there's a whole lot of excitement being a goldfish. maybe you should have put a cock joke at the end, then people would shut up. also there's people that only have like a 30 second memory too... it crazy.